http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qf7hhnGaS_I&feature=related
watch the link above of one of Kesed Ragin's poems called Powershift.
now here's my poem, hope you like it.
Wanting.
should she desire his world?
adore such evident travel times fixed in your head that would soon kill your pride.
only because he promised to find that spot in your heart that would ease the pain from your surroundings.
little did you actually realize that that pain was encouragement.
but when he commenced that second person, it created a darkness around love.
promoting that certain not so gentle thou active mind, destroyed her thought of admiration.
yet it saved her ability to learn and experience, so that later on her eyes would glow of happiness.
-Erin Ayeh Sahar Muhammad.